Friday, August 14, 2020

The Comet's Tail Comments

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Chasing after the flame,
in spite of the heat

To bathe in the light
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Kurt Philip Behm
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Deluke Muwanigwa 14 August 2020

Good poem. I would add two lines Now you see the light The sun in your eye

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 August 2020

To bathe in the light —everything else is dark....wit of this writing

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