The Colour White Comments

An excellent poem written with thoughts hovering around family. I love my family too and so your poem does have a special appeal on me. 'Your beauty and kindness is your seal' - Brilliant!

Beautiful Poem Hazel. I could see your love for your daughter whom you mention as Eric's wife and for your grand daughter Caylin. Family is something which bind all.

Thanks dear Hazel for the sharing of the lovely poem, returned again to rate it with 10++++++. Subhas

Wow Hazel, you have written this poem so beautifully, I feel wordless to deliver the most honest compliment.

A teenager listening to your favourite band, Now you're a grown up lady, But i still see my girl running gracefully along the sand, You make your dreams real, Simply beautiful.

Beautiful words on the love and strength of your family. I too have daughters and to see them beautiful and caring makes me proud. Enjoy ever moment.

Well, the voting booth is still closed so I can't give your lovely poem a rating of 10. I'll jot it down so that if they ever fix the thing I will come back and plaster a 10 on your ratings!

I love the way Ireland is always a main character, a main force, in your poetry, grounding and defining the elements of the piece. This made me look back on my life as well - The storm of life roars in to disrupt our routine and flow, We stop to dream a new dream, Love it. 10

Relating to a daughter this poem has been astutely and startlingly inscribed through white colour having an interesting beginning. Insightful depiction. I quote....... A teenager listening to your favourite band, Now you're a grown up lady, But i still see my girl running gracefully along the sand, You make your dreams real, Great work. Thanks.

Your brown eyes shining with zest, intelligence and your ability to fight, For a good life, For love and romance and to become Eric's wife, ...... greatly composed on daughter compropising past and present using excellent imageries, ........ As the Siberian winds make it flurry and dance, Through the tranquil beauty of County Carlow, ......... again, Living is now slow, As we watch Storm Emma blow, .......... and mor, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++++ 10