Tuesday, December 1, 2020

The Colors Outside And In Comments

Rating: 5.0

The colors suddenly make me happy for a moment
Perhaps they can also calm me a bit now
The amber the shades of green the yellow leaves
And the bright glistening grass
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Shalom Freedman
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Khairul Ahsan 19 December 2020

The poem, so well written, deserves full marks and I heartily give it 5 Stars *****! I recommend this poem to be selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day' for any day soon.

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Khairul Ahsan 19 December 2020

'But turns me again to the leaves Which now fading as the sun goes down Leave me somewhat calmer perhaps But not completely alright-' - I can relate easily to these lines.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 December 2020

And not completely alright And not completely all bright For some more sadness. Great poem

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