Monday, September 4, 2017

The Colors Of My Love Comments

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There is no way to describe
The colors of my love
For their hues are not confine
To the colors in a wheel
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Bri Edwards 14 May 2018

(cont.) ....you write of colors (plural) , but in ONE place you use it is, not they are. ...In the cold of the autumn wind it is ever warm i think you want they are. this is a lovely poem. i DO wonder if my love refers to a love you have for another person or for some thing(s) , OR if my love refers to love you receive from another source. hmm? bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 14 May 2018

3rd line: perhaps confined? :) to MyPoemList this goes. i'm glad i've heard of and seen 'color wheels', so i think i know your meaning of wheel. (continued) ...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 May 2018

It is an outstanding write on love and colour having an amusing depiction. The colors of true love remain alive. It may be quoted..... The colors remain alive, they never fade Untarnished and glowing with the passing years Beautiful poem thanks for sharing.10

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