Sunday, July 1, 2018

The Colorful Canvas Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Being deceived in love and attempting to erase you face
from the white canvas of my life,
I rubbed my closed eyelids and saw a blue color in it,
then many colors started playing hide and seek,
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Red Soul 02 July 2018

This is beautiful. You create a world of beauty and fantasy and express LOVE as it takes us deeply in, spellbounding (is that even a word?) us, and making us feel mesmerised at the beauty of love. A wonderful poem Mr Jawad. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 02 July 2018

You are flying on the wings of imagination and taking your readers too along with you through the cerulean sky to look down into the panorama of the ocean below and its many mysteries! ! Your canvas is colorful! A beautiful face peers out from it! Treasure it like a pearl! A sure 10

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Robert Murray Smith 01 July 2018

When a rainbow is broken in pieces we know we have read a great poem.++10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

Canvas of life carries love and this cannot be erased easily. Only colours can be twisted with brush of emotion. Love is moon, love is calm and love is sun. Love carries long light and this gives identity to a person. A brilliant poem is excellently penned...10

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