Sunday, October 18, 2020

The Color Of My Debt Comments

Rating: 5.0

She'll pay me back she said
Once that she's out of the red,
And when that time is serene
She promised she would pay me back my green,
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Randy McClave
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Denis Mair 18 October 2020

It's wonderful how you bring in so many color words, adding a playful touch to what otherwise could be a miserable situation. I am intrigued by the word " tartan." Perhaps tartan is a color pattern indicating that someone has gumption to stand up for himself like Braveheart.5 stars for your rainbow of words.

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