Sunday, March 16, 2014

The Color Of Love Comments

Rating: 1.5

Paint me the color that my body turns when it burns
at the thought of your touch
Brushstroke in the hues of the afterglow of ecstacy.
My cheeks the slightest hint of blush
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LeAnn Roderick
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Leah Ayliffe 03 July 2014

your poems are short but have a lovely impact on the mind. in such short lines you paint a descriptive image.

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Colleen Courtney 19 March 2014

This short little poem is so wonderful! ! ! Great imagery! Keep writing please!

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Chuy Amante 17 March 2014

Yeah! Let me grab a paintbrush! Powerfully tasty! keep them coming!

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