Thursday, September 22, 2016

The Color Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Te dawn smiled and said,
'It's all over now vacate the throne for me,
and go,
but before you go,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Siddartha Montik 24 December 2016

lovely to read the argument between day and (with their supportingskilsl of paints) . so drawn in from Dawn to dusk.. as they both work for a favour...for life. thank you for sharing Sir! full vote.

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Rajnish Manga 23 September 2016

The poem is a true reflection on the poet's study and grasp of nature and its ever changing face. The dialogue between a new day and a night about to leave the stage at dawn is breath-taking. Thanks a lot, Akhtar Jawad sahab.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 September 2016

Something beautiful! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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