Monday, January 13, 2003

The Colonel Comments

Rating: 3.3

What you have heard is true. I was in his house.
His wife carried a tray of coffee and sugar. His
daughter filed her nails, his son went out for the
night. There were daily papers, pet dogs, a pistol
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A very gripping story. A vivid and powerful depiction of crimes and violence. Those who are called to govern and accepted wholeheartedly must perform their duty with dignity.

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S E Ingraham 15 January 2020

I have read this many times and each time it's as if it's the first. Such stark horror told in an everyday way - they're having supper, the Colonel is very matter-of-fact in his complaints and the way he has dinner served before the ears arrive. He is trying to make a point and he does - what a tour de force Forche has managed with this poem. Brilliant in my view. It stays in my mind for days and my heart forever.

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Susan Williams 02 September 2016

Not my cup of tea... thankfully not my glass of water either

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Bharati Nayak 02 September 2016

The story may be true, but on the Poem of the Day Page it fills the heart with horror and gloom.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2016

He spilled many human ears on the table! This is serious! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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* Sunprincess * 04 June 2014

.............a very good start for a short story....now we just need to find out why the main characters are there having dinner with a bad guy.....and why hasn't the police locked this man up.... and thrown away the key....

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Cat Hodgson 14 April 2014

harsh but maybe true in land of other

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Michelle Claus 13 April 2014

I felt compelled to read this in is entirety. It wouldn't release me. It's an odd work... haunting. I still have questions. This poem's relentless subject-verb sentences work somehow. I'm not sure how I feel....

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Liliana ~el 13 April 2014

So intense. Really deep and evoking. Putting out the story with simple, full description. Sticks

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Eugene Levich 13 April 2014

Wow! If poetry is supposed to affect one's emotions- then this poem certainly hits the mark dead on. Brava!

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Richard Blay 13 April 2014

this is sure a poem, realism for that matter. good poem. makes sense to me

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Sandra Feldman 13 April 2014

Is this poetry? For me it's swindle plus, worthy to be posted in a bus.

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Francie Lynch 13 April 2014

He's no Colonel Kurtz.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 April 2014

beautiful drop.reading again.

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Bill Grace 15 April 2012

Wonderful piece of work! Bill Grace

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Carlos R. 14 April 2012

Simply stunning! I could never have possibly imagined this sort of behavior from Col. Harland David Sanders, but there we have it.

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Carlos R. 14 April 2012

Stunning... I could never possibly have imagined such behavior from Col. Sanders.

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Padma Devkota 14 April 2012

I find this poem quite similar to Dead Soldiers by James Fenton. Not as powerful, not quite historically located, but with a quiet and unassuming beginning that ends with a grabbing loudness of tone. Decadence attracts like crime and violence on news.

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Jan Hauck 13 April 2012

I agree with the powerful message, however, the form is puzzling to me. It is almost prose, almost like a short story or the start of one. I often think that certain boundaries can be beneficial for a poem.

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Andrew Fincham 25 October 2006

This holds so much power within in, which refuses to be contained. I admire this very much.

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