Monday, January 13, 2003

The Cold Comments

Rating: 2.6

There was a cold
In which

A line of water across the chest risen
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Erin Mouré
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K.c. Ford 01 May 2014

Pretentious prattle

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Leslie Philibert 01 May 2014

An enigmatic, quality poem. Like the inversion of a chest risen, the use of echolalic amd embroglio, (concatenation I will have to check) .. Like too the way it parses perfectly despite the complex use of phrases. Excellent.

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THE FIRST SHRIKE 07 April 2007

I appreciate the poem for it's will, or so it is that you have spoken.For when a lion truely roar's the ground can't help but shift.

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Erin Mouré

Erin Mouré

Calgary / Alberta / Canada
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