Monday, March 9, 2009

** The Cold Wind ** Comments

Rating: 3.1

The wavy wind strikes the leaves
and the leaves are blowing up and down!
and it was seen by me
and wary winds see me
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swagathnath rajeswari
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a lovely poem..keep going

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acharya gopinath 09 March 2009

A good write for a young child. Really find good. Keep it up. I do put full marks for you dear poet.

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