==the Cold That Took You Away== Comments

I love the sadness that this magnificient poem portrays. I am amazed of you.. Your just 16 but you write like a pro! I like your poetry. Your just too blessed with talent that came from God. So keep using it. I love your work. I'm your fan!

I love the sadness that this magnificient poem portrays. I am amazed of you.. Your just 16 but you write like a pro! I like your poetry. Your just too blessed with talent that came from God. So keep using it. I love your work. I'm your fan!

i liked it it was really good keep writin poems id give it a 10

very sad poem, love the second part, you are really talented...keep going....10 Hataw

Many thanks for inviting me. This is really excellent poem. You have put very nice and emotional words, well done. regards

Well done....., keep up the fine work.....! ! !

This is really well written. It is sad, but it's good.

read it, it's kind of sad, i feel so sorry for if this really happened, it was a will wrote poem

It is obvious that you have a very emotional tie to this poem. That is such a good trait to have. It has been quite a time since I've read anything as heart and mind-usage inducing. Very very good.

Tyease, I really enjoyed this poem. Your flow was very good. Your rhymes seemed natural (vs. forced) . The poem held emotions well, that I could feel. I would have liked a 'little more' of images in order to 'see' it in my mind. I would highly recommend it to other's. Great job.

I believe it's a wonderful poem. Filled with beautiful, descriptive words, sewn together to make one of the best poems I have ever read.11/10. You are a gifted author, continue to let you light shine bright. Congrats! ! !

It is difficult to place the location of the poetic event. I got a little lost in the tropical island and the severe cold. Interesting poem though. Jim

Wow, I have a feeling that you had to grow up way too quickly. Your poem has such dept and maturity. thanks for inviting me in

10/10 your poems are great n inspire me

A very powerful and intimate poem very good job 10

wow very intence but its awesome i love it.............10 hehe