The Cold Heart Comments

It's true what you said this is similar to my poem it's very touching.: D

Wow, nice poem. keep up the good work :)

Nice. Many people can relate to the top. When will this end climbing to the top just to get smacked down again, I see a light but it all fades to black living in darkness Very good words, as WE constatnly worry, and build up. We get to the top, and get knocked down again. Love the word Fiend as it pertains to an image of your whole poem. Life is always one step forward and two steps back. Just gotta get up again. :)

Your wording is very deep and thought provoking! Powerful and meaningful as well! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Your poetic potential is shown through this well penned! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!