Saturday, April 13, 2013

The Cobweb Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

Drowsy eye-lids unwillingly parted
Scent of the dead rose petals filled
With the spouse’s sweat salty spilled
In bed-room; beauty lies scattered.
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Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam
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Wahab Abdul 22 April 2013

i am fully agree with Valsa George, a super write.

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Valsa George 14 April 2013

This is a splendid write! The spider squatting at the centre of the cobweb to trap and prey on the unwary moths, the vultures waiting to feed on flesh- all are suggestive word pictures and reflect the ugly and gnarled face of the present society ! !

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