The Cobbler Comments

Wonderful write! An image that we know so well but don't think much about.

Great job done! ! Loved this awesome piece.

interestingly penned/like it

I love the way you bring readers to read this good narrative skill and story..i liked it, but the finished lines were sad and touched, but glow a spirit to readers i guess..keep it up_Unwritten Soul

Piggy back he rode, Alas! ! ! The Cobbler had no feet. a panorama...done well.... a well painted scene of urban sprawl..well written and likeable cheers

Excellent! A beautifully crafted poem that clearly describes just a part of the City life! This thought provoking and touching write also shows your talent and writing skills! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City!

Just good. fantastic

Great story of the hustle of life, and the things we miss along the way. Beautiful contrast between a man who repairs shoes and has no feet himself, yet he appears to walk in wisdom and happiness.

really good poem i like it..

its an awesome work..buddy.. epic... really impressive..you got the skill! ! ! !

just a poignant write.....sir you always make me speechless.....thanks for sharing it with us

Goodness heart! What end! ! ! Very impressive with all effects... a narrative poem, a sensational story...carrying the reader's focus -all riveted till the end...........! .