Monday, April 6, 2009

* * * The Coat Of Superman... Comments

Rating: 5.0

She long sewed for this stars-boy the coat of superman...
As Juju, just filled, it's over multi-coloured stars...
Such last strokes-elements have appeared magic...
Yesterday's dreams proceeds as support now,
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Fay Slimm 06 April 2009

The sentence formation here Tsira is just magic - - how do you do it - - this is very good to read aloud.... a 10 + ++ from Fay; ..xx

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Chimerically innovative, to say the very least, young lady....I'm with Sadi, on his comment, below me....I'm a darkside....abstract & impulsive writer...but you got me beat...teach me yir' majique dear maiden, from Capital City, Tbilisi, Georgia! FjR ***

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Catrina Heart 06 April 2009

magnificent write.....great craft! ! !

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Sadiqullah Khan 06 April 2009

If you could teach me this............10

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Fiona Davidson 06 April 2009

Wonderful upbeat write Tsira....best Fi...10

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