Monday, April 2, 2018

The Clouds That Rise In The Mild April Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love rises as clouds from the oceans
an a mild and pleasant lovely April,
wanders under blue skies
winkling the green trees,
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Simone Inez Harriman 04 April 2018

'But love is destined to kiss the mountains. Waving its hands to the rivers and assuring them to join soon their grand walk it flies and flies to its final destination to melt the arms of high mountains.' Your poem is a spiritually vibrant feast of April delight.10+

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Bharati Nayak 03 April 2018

the clouds that rise in the mild April will go back to back their bed room for rest somewhere in the deep oceans to rest and sleep till the next April. - - - - - Love, the life fore of creation, written in nature, finds lovely expression in this poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 April 2018

Akhtar Jawad just unceasingly outpour beautiful words in this magnetic poem like a never ending beautiful water falls. Simply amazing nature write with compelling imagery.10

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 April 2018

Beautiful poem on nature, humming sweetly in mild April. Beautiful picture. Enjoyed the beauty of nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Nudershada Cabanes 02 April 2018

An image filled poem beautifully crafted.10

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