Tuesday, January 6, 2009

The Clouds On The Mountains Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clouds on the mountains like smoke are descending
And cloaking the sunlight they gather with force,
A storm is approaching with rumbles of thunder
And flashes of lightning that follow their course,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Vaibhav Pandey 19 January 2009

your poems always describe the nature so beautifully.... I admire your poems a lot.

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Thad Wilk 16 January 2009

You have painted TWO fantastic scenes onto one canvas elegantly mounted and displayed - for all to enjoy! ! *10*! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Duncan Wyllie 15 January 2009

I think that Ernestine says it so accurately here Andrew, , , 'A purifying poem ' Leaving the reader refreshed and open to a new day Thankyou for this beautiful write Love duncan X

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Mamta Agarwal 15 January 2009

Andrew, you have brought to life through vivid images, a storm brewing, and after wards a calm descending uplifting the heart with serenity, beauty, joy and to top it all a rainbow, which i saw long time ago when Dellhi was not so pollutedlovely, breathtaking.20/10 Mamta

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Sandra Fowler 07 January 2009

A lovely descriptive piece. You are a very good imagist.10 for you. As always, Sandra

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Andrew I remember my very first poem was about a storm and I was too shy to read it in class after being taught writing poetry skills. You have used these - alliteration, personification, rhyme, rhythm, and painted a wonderful picture. Very well done. Karin Anderson

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