The Clouds Of Remorse Comments

great run of ideas woven into similies and nature superb...strong emotive well done cheers

let clouds appear and cause a pain..... good poem dear

Saddening thoughts...presented imaginatvely...clouds/ moistening tears/showers/tempest- word usage provides excellent connectivity to the theme inside...emotions storming off...good work...Angel...10

Keep the dreams and hopes alive even the clouds of remorse are there all over the sky. Sad and beautiful poem with good flow of words and thoughts. Best Wishes Naseer

lovely write AF...like the flow through it...10+++

Excellent keep it up 10 pluss

can feel the sadness.....well penned

nothing is gained by remorse or repentence.Its not worth anything. beautiful liness and a greatly expressive poem excellent

well I feel like that too sometimes...i mean i feel life is not worth living..feels bad too..... 'Cradling stones hold fire bright As crickets call out to the moonlight As you lean in to steal a kiss I'll never need more than this We all share the pain of our histories But the ache goes away if you could see This night under stars, well, I call it peace If you say, I'll never need more than this' this is a song by Vanessa Carlton, my favourite vocalist..I try to think like that..but it s easier said than done though 10+++

Lot of depth of emotion and feelings. Very well penned. Disappointments in life one day will turn into true joys. Failures are stepping stones of success.

''But it’s my dreams and hopes that’s to be self-sacrificed; '', just wonderful 10++