Sunday, October 10, 2010

The Clouds Are Crying Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clouds are crying,
God must be sad.
Somebody's been lying,
Somebody's been bad.
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Juan Olivarez
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Bert Bell 10 October 2010

I like the tender, almost innocent feel of this poem, and the good imagery. Well done.

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