Tuesday, November 26, 2013

The Clouds And You Comments

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The clouds and you

All the dark clouds of mind are gathered in the sky,
Is it for you or not I don't know
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Morose Mermaid
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Khairul Ahsan 30 November 2013

It's a beautiful, romantic poem. An epitaph of the dried, buried drop of sweat could be: ' I lie here in warmth, In your softness, In your touch, In your wants.'

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Muhammad Ali 29 November 2013

a nice poem of love dear. good work. deep emotions and too light to read.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 November 2013

This is a beautiful poem. 'Now a days its raining a lot Not from the sky though.' A good expression.

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