The Clouds And The Child Comments
Here we find patches of a war
mind of a fallen bricks
wings of a sea
muse of a inborn child
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really a poignant poem.........a good presentation of war.....thanks KEE
The clouds and the child, nice story highlighted in penned lines. Keep on writing. Nice job.
Wow, a fantastic dedication to your cute baby. Very true said, its a bad sight for the baby. The gun knows only to fire, it will not see unborn child nor the expecting mother. It will just kill who ever comes on its way. Such cruel is the war. How may unborn babies might have been killed in the war. its really a pathetic condition ever to be witnessed. Fantastic presentation. Loved reading it.
Oh, this is fantastic Kee! I saw it only now! But the sight of a war I don't think is a pleasing sight!
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7/27/2025 8:03:41 AM # 1.0.0
Not make it a dream baby you may want to fight for your mother................................beautiful write kee...nicely presented.....