The Clouds Comments

waal this is really nice. No matter how hard the clouds Try to hide the stars That will never disqualify their existence Because the stars will always be there sure this is inspiring

'No matter how hard the clouds Try to hide the stars That will never disqualify their existence' Deep words, with an enlightened meaning. 10/10

THIS IS WHY I'M WAITING FOR THE CLOUDS TO REVEAL THE LIGHT OF THE STARS............... Yes, it needs a brave heart to face all the challenges of life. Bravo. Stand strong on your own feet and fight straight against dark. Not only excellent expression, it also acts as the voice to recite thousand times in singles life anywhere anytime on the globe. Star symbolizes the eternal truth, and clouds are the relative hardles of daily life which pulls us back to attain there..............Congratulation! ! ! Write more poet........more you write. Regards, 10+++ pranab

know that the time will come When we will sing and dance every night Because the stars will be providing us with light Clouds as negative powers trying to hide the beauty of the stars.. nice idea thank u for sharing.

Well-penned...nicely thought out

The clouds are a blanket and the stars are sleeping.