Thursday, November 3, 2016

The Closed Coffee Shop Comments

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Many a meal of honey drizzled handouts
Standing on your breadline of love
Holding back the pain of starvation
For any tiny morsel offered
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Susan Lacovara
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Seamus O Brian 03 November 2016

Such vivid imagery. Imaginative and painfully detailed. The images of food and hunger overlaid on love and desire produce an internal conflict in the reader that is uncomfortably compelling and memorable. Well done.

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

New York
Susan Lacovara
Susan Lacovara
New York
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