Friday, September 11, 2009

The Clock Strikes 12 And The Moment Is Gone Comments

Rating: 5.0

A crooked smile
Life of a person
Sitting in denial
Depression of spirits
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Seairra Kyger
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Sharon Stevens 17 September 2009

i really liked this poem. It took a few readings, as many with depth do. It read a little like sylvia plath, a bit sad, resigned and nostalgic for something that is not yet lost, but ultimately will be. Beautiful. Thanks for posting, and thanks for asking me to read it, im glad i did xx

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Tom Bates 14 September 2009

yeah it took me a while to get what you were saying but when i did i realized this was awesome!

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Tim Stafford 13 September 2009

i found this poem a little confusing but really enjoyable. Please refer me to any others that you have.

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Never be afraid to take chances 'He who hesitates loses.' a ten...

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Joseph Poewhit 11 September 2009

The heros often fail in the end.

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Seairra Kyger

Seairra Kyger

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