Monday, July 5, 2021

The Clock Of Life Is Ticking Comments

Rating: 4.4

the workers toil
the farmers plow
description the housewives cook
and take care of the children
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Nabakishore Dash 14 December 2021

well written philosophy of life and daily routine work.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 July 2021

A poem of great insight so well crafted and conveyed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 July 2021

Time has its own course and never submits to any man.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 July 2021

The intricacies of life and time is always a part of our life.

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Lasaad Tayeb 06 July 2021

Wonderfully written poem dear Sylvia, and it's so true time is consuming us, time is a sword if we don't cut it, he will cut us.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 06 July 2021

Lovely poem! Reminds me of Ernest Dowson's famous verse-They are not long, the days of wine and roses: Out of a misty dream Our path emerges for a while, then closes Within a dream.

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Deepak S S 06 July 2021

Click, click time is moving on

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Paul Brookes 06 July 2021

Great write of daily life

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 July 2021

but like the clock at home is ticking doesn't it tick anywhere

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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