The Clock Comments

clock counts step of vein Teaches to take breath in well Live in punctual

What a thoughtful insight into the nature of time in our life. A well crafted mechanism, this piece of writing. Well done!

never thinks to stop - an excellent poem.10

That clock may be laughing because it knows things we don't. A very fine poem, Rich.

Never think to stop! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Interesting write. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.