The thought sent shivers through me.Even though it's a thing everyone knows. the chosen words intensify the idea, making it seem deadly. And that's where the greatness of a poet lies. Great poem.
time stews all... great thought..well expressed.. read my poem KAAL, too
Definitely. It haunts n warns us of the precious time v r wasting each day. Its not just a sound.. Its a deadly sound... Or say a warning signal.. Nice one. Wel done.
oh! sir you always have way with your words...incredible write indeed true and full of thoughts thank you for sharing love payal
A great poem, when we watch the clock, we watch our life tick away.
Very nice poem! I liked it's depth thought it's short.. and musical too.
beutifully told, the truth of life..which tickles day by day, slow and steady...