Wednesday, October 24, 2012

The Clock Comments

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Jahan Zeb
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Vijay Sai R 12 November 2012

beutifully told, the truth of life..which tickles day by day, slow and steady...

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 04 November 2012

The thought sent shivers through me.Even though it's a thing everyone knows. the chosen words intensify the idea, making it seem deadly. And that's where the greatness of a poet lies. Great poem.

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Anita Sehgal 25 October 2012

time stews all... great thought..well expressed.. read my poem KAAL, too

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Shivani Misra 24 October 2012

Definitely. It haunts n warns us of the precious time v r wasting each day. Its not just a sound.. Its a deadly sound... Or say a warning signal.. Nice one. Wel done.

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Payal Parande 24 October 2012

oh! sir you always have way with your words...incredible write indeed true and full of thoughts thank you for sharing love payal

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Dave Walker 24 October 2012

A great poem, when we watch the clock, we watch our life tick away.

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Fatma Ballaswud 24 October 2012

Very nice poem! I liked it's depth thought it's short.. and musical too.

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