Monday, April 20, 2009

The Clock Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't want to deal in reality's anymore and yet it sits right before me big and brash..
As the time ticks down like a large clock on a wall, I can hear the click of the big arm as it moves from one second to the next.
The tension is palpable and we are like pawns in the universe waiting...waiting for...
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Pauline Levesque
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Ian Bowen 21 April 2009

Pauline, this one kept me reading. Loved the way you wrote this very enjoyable piece.10/10 Ian

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