The Climber Comments

Climb up, climb up The Sun coaxes Climb up, climb up The wind whispers.....Captivating expression! A beautiful poem.

ruta, so i'm starting to read more of your poems and tried this first. like your poem of the day, this poem shows good craft—you use rhyme to good effect without mangling the sense or logic. i like this. i like your identification with the vine and the natural lyricism of it. cool! -glen

A beautiful poem with a soft flow and well crafted. Watching a creeper going up on walls and swinging with wind is so refreshing. Thanks for sharing.

A lovely poem. It captures the beauty of a vine plant. Vividly portrayed and well crafted.10

A very beautiful structured poem...! Appreciated the description of lovely little blue flowers! My favorite lines: Climb up, climb up/The Sun coaxes/Climb up, climb up/The wind whispers/Oh, I am so far from the ground! Top marks!