Saturday, August 6, 2016

The Climber Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my garden
A climber grows
From the trellised platform
It strays its way
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Valsa George
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 June 2022

Absolutely a magnificent poem. Top score.

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Loke Kok Yee 25 August 2016

You are not only a gifted poetess But also an accomplished gardener! In every subject you are so well versed And your hands create natural wonders!

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Valsa George 26 August 2016

Loke. You have given me a joyride With such words, into false pride I glide Now I am on cloud nine Lord... don't make me asinine! !

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Tom Billsborough 10 August 2016

My Jasmine is a rather unruly climber. It's now decided to wander into my large Rose bush. Your climber looks magnificent and your description is equally so! A beautiful poem, Valsa. Flowers give us so much pleasure and if they attract bees all the better. Tom Billsborough

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 August 2016

Beautiful poem enhanced by real picture that you took in your backyard. You grow the plant, nurture it, describe in a poem, and express your deep feelings. The plant will feel there is someone who cares.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Growing of climber in garden not only increases the beauty of home but also brings fortune of expression. Seeing climber at early morning we get aroma of memory. Very wonderful poem is shared with nice vision....10

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Queeny Gona 09 August 2016

Brand new perspective on the Tear stained flowers early each morning! The picture is crystal clear even before we could have a glimpse of the climber dear Ma'am! Very pleasant write in deed. This very write of yours portrays your interest in paying attention to the beautiful nature and surroundings as well!

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Savita Tyagi 07 August 2016

Lovely poem and love the picture of those climbing vines. Some time I miss these warm weather flowering climbers. How easily it finds ways to climb every where.

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Kim Barney 06 August 2016

Wonderful poem and beautiful picture to accompany it. Fantastic job, Valsa!

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Akhtar Jawad 06 August 2016

I too have this creeper in the green belt, creating a short distance between the road and the walls of my house, it's pink and white flowers, among the green leaves reveal the hidden beauty of nature, no need to describe it, Valsa has already done it in this amazing poem. I shall now love this creeper more as it will remind me of lovely friend, a great poetess perhaps the best when she describes nature and the human sentiments.

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Susan Williams 06 August 2016

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, so well written I can smell them, am soothed by their soft swaying in the breeze. You paint your poems with a delicate and fine sable paint brush, each detail caught in eloquent verses. Most excellent!

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Valsa George 08 August 2016

Susan.... I am so much delighted by your beautiful comment.....! This I consider as a great recognition from a great poet..... thank you so much!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 06 August 2016

Your poem reminds me of Nosheen's red rose which I just read. Both exquisite. Are you two in telepathic communion? (10)

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2016

Growing close! ! To respect the muse of nature. Nice piece of work.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 August 2016

Excellent write. Richly descriptive. And the last verses lend so much weight to the write when the poet questions....do they lament their transient fate or are they sad...molested by amorous bees? This says a lot about life....and gives the poem a human identification. A big 10.

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Kelly Kurt 06 August 2016

I love my flowers and gardens in general, and I loved this poem. Eloquently written, Valsa

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