Wednesday, August 2, 2006

The Climb Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hesitated as I touched her legs
And she coaxed me on as if she could sense
The inexperience of a fifteen year old boy
I ran my hand along her smooth body and I became afraid
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Mpho Petrus Manwedi
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Barry Van Allen 16 January 2007

Mpho, To get a '10' from me isn't really rare, but, I don't throw them out like some! What you said was almost what any 'kid' that age was thinking! And doing! BUT, the way that you described it was outstanding!

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Sean North 05 August 2006

Mpho i to love to make love to lesotho, thanx for sharing her NDODA, the beautifull lady in your backyard,

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Dee Daffodil 03 August 2006

Very clever piece Mpho...etremely well written...you certainly leave the reader wondering, right until the very end. Great poem! Hugs, Dee

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