The Climb Comments

(cont.) i DO feel the poem may be a bit too optimistic. i feel not all are able to travel the roads which will lead them to beauty, success, and/or happiness. Some are hampered by poor health, poor education (or the wrong education) , family and other personal problems. but for some, this poem could be very useful, though a bit 'vague' in its suggestions. ;) :) bri ;)

i'm liking it so far. Every crossings lead to another direction...i'd use crossing leads ;) then many roads, not road. road we take are different..is They are waiting... i think It is waiting, referring to beauty. etc. but i still like the poem very much, despite some English irregularities (to my eyes) . to MyPoemList. (cont.)