Friday, February 8, 2019

The Clever Mouse (A Royal Encounter) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clever, clever little mouse
twice you moved, changed your house

You thought:
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Chris Embrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 February 2019

An amazing story, Chris. It can be read to children, they will surely love it. Well penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 February 2019

This meeting and moving of clever muse is brilliant penned. You have excellent idea in sharing views. This is an amazingly penned nice poem.10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2019

I wanna tell you too that your poem is very entertaining. Windsor Castle comes peeping here. I have enjoyed very much your wonderful poem and everything that occurred inside. Thank you for sharing, Chris.

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Chris Embrick 08 February 2019

Thank you. You're very kind. I appreciate your comments. Perhaps the tale will continue.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2019

WOW! Really a sweetest poem. Once I have caught a clever little mouse with those eyes, I had the mouse in my bare hands, because I dare to hold a mouse in my hands, that's why I have caught the only mouse in our house, not that one of my laptop's, on the contrary, but a real mouse. I brought that mouse to the center of the woods, far far away from my house, sure she has a very lot to tell her colleagues. Your poem is a marvelous story! 10++

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