I speak with the shells of
your eggs
on my tongue
shards of them fragile
...
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I like it. I like it. I read it and reread - not to figure out what it means but to learn more about what it suggests. I also enjoy the language for itself and cannot begin to tell you why.
The metaphor of the egg is right on target! And censorship has now taken a good cracking! What we write, say, is always 'censored' by someone...crack! there goes another egg for you to speak the shells of...excellent! xxxElys