Tuesday, September 1, 2009

The Clever Egg Comments

Rating: 3.0

I speak with the shells of
your eggs
on my tongue
shards of them fragile
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Terri Turrell
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Elysabeth Faslund 14 October 2009

The metaphor of the egg is right on target! And censorship has now taken a good cracking! What we write, say, is always 'censored' by someone...crack! there goes another egg for you to speak the shells of...excellent! xxxElys

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Otteri Selvakumar 25 September 2009

nice nice... with a clever egg

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Robert Howard 12 September 2009

I like it. I like it. I read it and reread - not to figure out what it means but to learn more about what it suggests. I also enjoy the language for itself and cannot begin to tell you why.

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