Wednesday, March 25, 2009

*the Clenched Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

The fair one in dream
The glory of face radiant
Lips were like grapes
Soft to squeeze and eyes
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Naidz Ladia 25 March 2009

'Another living the beloved promised Don not grieve for the shortness I still look for the possibilities When the languor of that presence Shall ask how it is spent'......this is a promise..''i still look for the possibilities'...this is it...the author is expressing a very strong faith and courage...this is another eye opener...i like this... naizz

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Fiona Davidson 25 March 2009

Deep and soulfull writing Sadiqullah....10+++

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Naidz Ladia 25 March 2009

clenched soul? waitttttttttttttttt...is this soul angry? .......k, , , , i'll just be right back ha to put words on this piece...

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Noel Horlanda 25 March 2009

I find it interesting. I have to dig deeper or to think profoundly to get the meaning of your creation. Well anyway, it is excellent, my friend. +10

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