Tuesday, September 22, 2015

The Clamour Of The Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

After the burial of
A neighbourhood child
I stayed in the cemetery
Where lash grasses, trees
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Alem Hailu Gabre Kristos
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Alem Hailu G/kristos 26 September 2015

Dear Roseann Thank you to your feedback that will encourage me keep on writing and refining my poems

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Roseann Shawiak 26 September 2015

Very sobering thoughts to ponder in a place where death has already taken place and there is no reprieve for anyone left there. While walking through, hearing your conscience telling you to repent before it's too late and you end up there too! Very profound thought process, Alem! Excellent poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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