The City Of Sunset And Sunrise Part Ii Comments

well written

Again a wonderful imagery. Saying that you can find out her glowing face even in pitch darkness is a very good imagery......very well done........

Now this makes sense, from the unclear thoughts you came up with a bright vivid poem with hope, a beautiful promise of tomorrow.......Well the reading must have the 2 parts, must not displaced the one....10

You're the mann! ! ! ! Bravo, Bravo, Bravo! ! ! ! ! ! ! MORE! ! ! ! !

light happens to emerge out of the darkness with much promise for tomorrow.......loved to read....thanks for sharing! ..

I love the pleasant pace of this writing. It makes it easy for the reader to follow along. The contents are soothing to the mind and I am certain you will succeed. GW62