The City of Sunrise
But even in the dark we can remember
Although I can not see your mouth right now
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Again a wonderful imagery. Saying that you can find out her glowing face even in pitch darkness is a very good imagery......very well done........
Now this makes sense, from the unclear thoughts you came up with a bright vivid poem with hope, a beautiful promise of tomorrow.......Well the reading must have the 2 parts, must not displaced the one....10
You're the mann! ! ! ! Bravo, Bravo, Bravo! ! ! ! ! ! ! MORE! ! ! ! !
light happens to emerge out of the darkness with much promise for tomorrow.......loved to read....thanks for sharing! ..
I love the pleasant pace of this writing. It makes it easy for the reader to follow along. The contents are soothing to the mind and I am certain you will succeed. GW62
well written