Saturday, March 21, 2009

The City Of Sunset And Sunrise Part Ii Comments

Rating: 4.5

The City of Sunrise

But even in the dark we can remember
Although I can not see your mouth right now
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

well written

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 March 2009

Again a wonderful imagery. Saying that you can find out her glowing face even in pitch darkness is a very good imagery......very well done........

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Catrina Heart 22 March 2009

Now this makes sense, from the unclear thoughts you came up with a bright vivid poem with hope, a beautiful promise of tomorrow.......Well the reading must have the 2 parts, must not displaced the one....10

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Chad Robinson 22 March 2009

You're the mann! ! ! ! Bravo, Bravo, Bravo! ! ! ! ! ! ! MORE! ! ! ! !

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Winnie Angel 21 March 2009

light happens to emerge out of the darkness with much promise for tomorrow.......loved to read....thanks for sharing! ..

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 March 2009

I love the pleasant pace of this writing. It makes it easy for the reader to follow along. The contents are soothing to the mind and I am certain you will succeed. GW62

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