The City Of Sunset And Sunrise Part I Comments

love it.. you have a nice piece penned as well.. what do you mean i should not despite? ? i cant understand..

Brilliant use of words. Definately paints a picture in one's mind.

A deep imagery; good flow of words. Well done.

Distress flows in this piece, a bit vague on you that reflected your creation. Pity for whatever it is....Thanks

What? are you in college? Got to be, man. How do you keep coming up with these masterpieces? Keep up the good work, you're gonna be somebody.

.....the thought presenting the environ is one of anguish and not of bright colors...but have convey the thoughts clearly...gud one! ..winnie