The City Of Souls Comments

Straight To The Soul! ! ! ! ! Ever Such Heart And Beauty This Does Show! ! ! ! ! Lost Whispers In The Wind So Much Grace! ! ! ! ! Power Within! ! ! ! ! Again WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever Ever So Very Many Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Beautiful poem with a fantastic beginning. The title of this poem has been properly justified. We see people around us, their face but not what inside them. Dear Soul, it has been well observed by you. It may be quoted... I am the lost whispers of summer breeze That move along the breaths of many In the city of souls I grasp them and hold There are anxiety, in bliss, happy, mourning, praying and worry Everything just mixed as one in the air In a gust of blow, where wind and breath we ride invicibly together Without knowing whose they belong to The dark side of appearance identities Whoever we are, everyone has a story In this city of souls.. Brilliant write with monologue. Thank u.

Nice poem..people around us with different feeling and emotions, some are struggling to survive but many time we never know, great lines++10

I do not think I have ever read such a powerful beginning to a poem before- -every word has been carefully chosen for its texture and sounds and imagery. Wow! I am staggered: I'm the lost whispers of wind tonight Travelling east to west Moving through up and down Like a roller coaster Wandering around In the city of souls. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -am captivated by the W words and the hissing of the S sounds in City of Souls. Extraordinary attention to detail here. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

What a lovely read even nicer to hear you read it. very well done. Annette

Voices! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The city of souls embrace flawed humanity in all it's diversity as the city moves with life, the individuals laugh, cry, despair and happiness walk the streets alone in the crowd of souls invisible to the eye but bursting with living! Amazing monologue and stunning write! !

A truly epic and beautiful poem, it's style reminds me of some of the great Japanese Haibun's.

It is a beautiful monologue with a very fine rhythm, like a gentle breeze running through it. I'll put it in my favourites, Soul!

lost whispers of wind, and skyscrapers of emotions.. very nice. poem is beautiful to read But painful to travel hmmm. the city of souls also reflects your positive thinking. I would say city of bodies being less positive :) . nice to read friend

Very well said it's city of souls, scattered everywhere with different dimensions and varying colours. Our emotions are like skyscrapers though we all know we are sure to fall in deepest valley. Still hope is what keep us going. Thought provoking write especially when we look back into our lives. Loved reading it.