Wednesday, September 28, 2016

The Circle Of Life Comments

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The Circle Of Life

A boulder's life it would be
when first it fell into the sea
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Annette Aitken
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 October 2016

For years! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Christopher Tye 05 October 2016

Wonderful poem, a really enjoyable read. Pebbles are often some of natures most beautiful creations just like this poem.

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Annette Aitken 08 October 2016

I love nature is can be so inspiring...thank you Christopher,

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2016

annette, as per my note, there are some contractions missing apostrophes. boulder's, it's, and, AGAIN, boulders. hee-hee. but a beautifully created nature poem. to MyPoemList it zooms! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri ;) favorite stanza: Rediscovered its now a stone soft and smooth rough edges gone feeble though all this may sound destiny was still not found........................and i always enjoy good rhyming, when appropriate. :)

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Annette Aitken 08 October 2016

Thanks Bri....thats so nice of you...even with my mistakes lol

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