Friday, May 5, 2017

The Circle Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ahem; a silly circle to take
A silly way to gear
The times of memories
Has ever got to you to 'REPEAT'
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Sarah Maria Sajith
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2017

but to bloom On heaven, I suppose To search the lights of 'wonder' Till the end but no end to see. going through difficulties, facing it with a courageous heart, being hopeful always..... thank yu for conveying positive notes even when every thing seems to be dark.. thank u dear poetess..tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 May 2017

So not to bloom on Earth I know, but to bloom On heaven, To search the lights of 'wonder' Till the end Very nice imagination and the proper use of words conveying a lot of inner joy. this is what i ask myself whenever i read you. What did i get after reading your poem. I would say inner joy, , , , , , tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 May 2017

A nice philosophical start. Thanks

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