The Cinder And The Ash Comments

Each red eye holds back the dragon. Japanese bonsai trees around stone gardens gold fish pond fed by, 'Shibumi hands always filled with orange paper lanterns....iip

great poem! the last line is fantastic! it sets off the whole thing

I've noticed your poems are very short... they are well written and mysterious though. Thank you for the poem.

Great poem! Did he look like a dragon, with smoke breathed through nostril's swell? God bless poets, all-MJG.