I can still smell the burning candles lighting up the walk way
And the rose petals carefully lined up along the path her princess walks
I feel the energy return to the room
The passion, remain lockset in my head
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It is a well written poem David. However it is over my head and I don't know what it's about.
Fantastic poem with great imagery and captivating style. I really enjoyed it. Excellent work.
This poem laments as something that goes away. Something that is not taken when there is opportunity. What a loss because everything was gone. A bit melancholic, but it seems a rather strong masculine in the whole diction. This is definitely a good work.
This is a very good poem & I can't wait to read the other two parts to this poem.