Monday, February 18, 2008

The Chronicles Of A New Day Part 1 5 Years From Now Comments

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5 years from now forgotten
maybe after so much time
out of the cage out of the pen
no longer trapped by word and rhyme
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David Knox
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Aine Ní Leidhin 18 February 2008

David - this poem seems laced with resignation and reconcillation. On the surface it is descriptive but underneath there is an expression of feeling as if trying to understand some psychological issue by which you are confronted. Poetry definately has something to give you so keep writing. Kind regards Aine

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