Monday, August 3, 2009

The Chosen Relation Comments

Rating: 4.3

Where are the days
when they were all mine
and i had those toys
at eight or late nine..
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prashant shaurya
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Marieta Maglas 08 August 2009

''can i bring back those times relive those days rewrite those rhymes restage those plays....'' nice poem, good stanzas, beautiful rhymes...10

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A bitter/sweet poem reflecting on childhood into the reality of adulthood. It is well contained within the stanzas, and I like your questioning at the end. Well done! Karin Anderson

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Ruth Walters 04 August 2009

Good poem, liked the stanzas...read my private reply to you.... Ruthy

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Ted M 04 August 2009

Those childhood days were always fun. Exploring, learning, all that innocent mischief those days are in the past and we have only nice memories. Excellent write, and nice rhyme.........10+++

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