The Chosen One Comments

Interesting poem Kanav. Your charges are too high, I will order, but let me save some penny for it.....

heheh a v hilarious poem.........i recall my childhood days wen me n my bro used to compete with each other as to who would kill the max no of houseflies that used to buzz around mostly during rainy seasons..........so u too a fly catcher! hmmmm...shall surely think of u when flies outnumber n the repellants stop working: -)

I tink a poet can b anyting. Yor soaring imagination cud take u frm being a fly catcher to magic carpets. Enjoyd yor fun super poem kanav.

A magnet for catching the flies is going to be invented by the Japanese soon! Just for house flies! I read it.somewhere. But before that happens you will have caught all the flies. But the way catch them is more important and so this proposal is great. Yet another Kanav Justa poem for honouring this December and the PH forum... Thank you for penning down this unique piece.

You have a strange power dat makes ur poems so unique.... always. i love dis Funny Flies Fiction. & i will knock you next summer Lol :)

During summer when fruits ripe, especially with jack fruits going over ripe and rotten, plenty of flies come buzzing! Then I will surely call you! But your charges are too high... Nogotiable? Interesting! !

Easy flow and the rhythm are commendable!