The Choice-Less Choice Comments

Love it! You started it with lovely lines and ended it in the same magical words as of the first. And you decorated it more suitable words in between. You're greater than me or any other poets in PH.

Very well written. You are certainly a very passionate poet. Your poem stands testimony to this fact.

[a choiceless choice. That is, what is not imposed from anywhere, But the automatic, spontaneous, bursts forth in the air.] -is the essence! Well said! voted 9/10

Such a concentration of words causes the reader through reflection on them to authorize himself. I suppose the poet goes to poetry whereas the poem must come to the poet, like a pet dog waiting to be fed and paid attention to. This I see as one aspect of a universal outline but details are in your poem. Such a wealth of concentration there. Cannot be absorbed in one reading. Commendable.

A poem on poems. When I read this poem I could feel the thrill which a poet must be experiencing while writing a poem, How his/her mind races from extremes of the universe to the boundlessness of imagination. Yes, these lines are a tribute to this form of art. These lines are sheer passion!