Tuesday, February 9, 2016

The Choice Is In You Comments

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When I was seventeen
Where was one more step to leave high school life
Where was one step closer to the reality
I always say that I will miss this school life
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Jingga Hartono
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Jingga Hartono 08 June 2016

Thank you for reading Dr. Tony keep on reading my poem.. never give up to catch up your dream.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 June 2016

But life is a choice If You choose to be success and happy You should be ready and strong to face it But success is you.. a great poem giving the advice to the reader... be successful....... in you life. struggle hard. you hve to find your success........... not to stray from the right path and go with a direction and a definite aim......... thank you for this advice dear poet. tony

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Ernest Makuakua 09 February 2016

You set your success Avoid those that expert in giving unimportant comments God gives you two hands not to cover their mouth that destroying you But to cover your ears so you will not be distructed So you will walk bravely in your success way BEAUTIFUL PIECE LOVE IT KEEP THE WORDS FLOWING

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Jingga Hartono 09 February 2016

thank you Mr. Ernest ^^.. thank you for keep reading my poem and give such a wonderful comment that motivate me to keep making poems.

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