Tuesday, October 30, 2007

The Choice Comments

Rating: 2.9

Once there was such passion
moments shared for hours or days
replaced with such tension
we cough a laugh and move on
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David Degnan
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Aurora Wells 02 November 2007

I know good things come to those who wait... as I waited for another poem from you.. and alas.. we have a great write.. choices are the same... patience, love and understanding all bring one thing.. happiness... and I wish you this as not only my brother-in-law, but as one of God's children.. my brother. Love to you and the family...

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Lee Degnan 31 October 2007

This is such a powerful write, you say in gripping detail how you feel, and there are so many instances you throw in there with the fewest of words, like snapshots, showing life and how your situation unfolds... many will relate to this poem. Oh, and by the way: Need more poems from you! ! ! And this is a mistake I won't make again. I love you. me

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